It's a nice tune.
It has potential, but it's a little too slow for my liking (the pauses especially). Keep up the good work! Just make the next song flow better.
People keep mentioning pauses, and I can't figure out if they mean where it loops or the breaks in the chords. If it's the loop, that can be removed, the syncopated chords are what give it the style it has. Either way, it was an example I put in the portal a long time ago as one example of what I could do if you wanted me to write for you.
Anyway, thanks for the review!
Never have heard anything like this song before. It was fantastic.
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